Earth-643: SUPERMAN Vol. 1 - Chapter Two

Earth-643: SUPERMAN Vol. 1 - Chapter Two

Alternate gods, among an alternate earth. Follow the stories of father and son, Jor-El and Kal-El, as they come face to face with life changing events, people, and places. Follow Kal-El as he struggles to find who he is, as the world around him does as well, and is being attacked by monsters from all sides. And follow Jor-El as a tragic event leaves him between a rock and a hard place, having to make the biggest decisions of his life and fight someone he never thought he would.

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By kong - Apr 11, 2015 06:04 AM EST
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Earth-643: SUPERMAN Vol. 1 - Chapter Two by King Caesar Kong


Alternate gods, among an alternate earth. Follow the stories of father and son, Jor-El and Kal-El, as they come face to face with life changing events, people, and places. Follow Kal-El as he struggles to find who he is, as the world around him does as well, and is being attacked by monsters from all sides. And follow Jor-El as a tragic event leaves him between a rock and a hard place, having to make the biggest decisions of his life and fight someone he never thought he would.
 
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TheBritAvenger
TheBritAvenger - 4/11/2015, 10:24 AM
Nice chapter Kong! Your writing style is definitely growing on me, and I like the relationship between Clark and Jimmy. Also, liked the Batman, Flash and Darkseid references. Overall, well done.
TheHero
TheHero - 4/11/2015, 9:17 PM
Nice job as always, Kong.
I loved the bit where Steve punches himself, but overall while you're style of writing is good the dialogue somewhat feels unrealistic, especially in the first part. I don't think that's how Lois would be acting in real life.

But anyways, good job and keep up the good work.
RustyGeek
RustyGeek - 4/12/2015, 3:19 PM
This was well done.

- I loved when Clark repositioned Lombard's fist.

- References were well done.

- Dialogue seems off to me. Especially with Lois and Jimmy but it seems right for the environment of your story.

So far so good. Enjoying your take on Supes so far. Can't wait to read more of your stuff.
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